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This was attributed to by Wallace's, observation that "many truck drivers load and unload their own rigs; this activity often requires heavy lifting combined with awkward posture (e.g., trunk flexion when bending down to grasp an object on the floor of the trailer)".
asked May 07 '11 at 17:36 Justice Mabesa New member

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It's complicated and unclear.  Here is my take at editing it.

 

 

This was attributed to by Wallace's observation, "Many truck drivers load and unload their own rigs.  This activity often requires heavy lifting combined with awkward posture, such as trunk flexion, that occurs when bending down to grasp an object on the floor of the trailer."

link comment answered May 07 '11 at 17:41 Paula Green New member
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