Question on Faulty Parallelism

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Grammarly says this sentence has faulty parallelism;

"I look forward to hearing from you soon about my interest in this position and thank you for your time and consideration of my letter. "

It is the closing on a Letter of Interest for an open Position at my current employer. Please review the sentence and let me know if it needs to be revised.

Thanks in advance

Ike

See example:

I look forward to hearing from you soon about my interest in this position and thank you for your time and consideration of my letter.
asked Nov 17 '12 at 15:42 dwight Welsh New member

Would it sound better like this.

"I look forward to hearing from you soon, and thank you for your time and consideration. "

dwight WelshNov 17 '12 at 17:32

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