could any one correct my grammar please?!! I don't know how to correct this. Thanks in advance!!

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The aim is to identify whether a universal desmoothing method, will be suitable to apply for all consider countries to generate plausible property volatility in comparison with bond and equity.

grammar correction asked Nov 05 '12 at 22:56 Jimbo New member

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My eyes tend to glaze over when I'm confronted with financial terms, but I do see a couple of errors even though I don't understand what you are talking about.

You need to remove the comma after method. I believe it should be 'apply to' rather than 'apply for'.

Consider should be considered.

 

 The aim is to identify whether a universal desmoothing method will be suitable to apply to all considered countries to generate plausible property volatility in comparison with bond and equity.

 

I really, really hope I haven't changed your meaning any.

link comment answered Nov 05 '12 at 23:04 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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