not sure how to rephase the sentence
the attached document will shows expected feeder file adjustments that will nee to be prepare and approve for October 2012.
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As of result of his analysis the attached document will shows expected feeder file adjustments that will need to be prepare and approve for October 2012.
Debra steward
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Correct: As of result of his analysis, the attached document shows the expected feeder file adjustments that will be need to be prepared and approved for October 2012.
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answered Nov 04 '12 at 06:23
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The sentence doesn't quite make sense to me. If the results of his analysis arre in the attached document, then you're saying that the results of his analysis are the results of his analysis. If the results are not in the document, then why bring up his analysis at all? Try this.
The results of his analysis are in the attached document. They show the expected feeder file adjustments that will be need to be prepared and approved for October, 2012.
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answered Nov 04 '12 at 11:45
Lewis Neidhardt
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