I am trying to write in active voice with past tense. what is wrong with this sentence?
The planning board recommended to ban new billboards and remove existing ones in a unanimous vote last night.
There's nothing wrong with this. I would move the last phrase to the beginning of the sentence to place it closer to 'board'.
In a unanimous vote last night, the planning board recommended to ban new billboards and remove existing ones.
|link comment||answered Nov 01 '12 at 20:48 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow|
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