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Any one demands, expresses any opinions which promote multi parties system for Vietnam in the internet or in news papers are considered as enemy of the country and will be put in jail.
asked Oct 29 '12 at 06:43
trng nguyen
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Anyone who demands or expresses any opinions which promote a multi-party system for Vietnam on the internet or in newspapers are considered an enemy of the country and will be put in jail.
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