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By this, I mean that there are certain jobs in the United States that need to get done, but almost no one takes them because there are often risks of injury, low pay, and simply because they are very difficult.

fix edited Oct 22 '12 at 13:39 Natalie C New member

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link comment answered Oct 22 '12 at 23:54 jose New member
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how to use a paired conjunction

link comment answered Feb 11 '13 at 05:42 omar New member
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 Are you one of these people who trust love ‘’Sooner than later” that maybe a achieved in one day later. Sooner than later which mean you’d like to start new relationship with someone but that with someone else already in relationship. Also, ‘’Sooner than later” can be succeed love for long time until one of two people died or for sort time that’s implied love benefit. Moreover, love from first look  I mean here when someone met girl. : True love, misses them being together, and courage and inspiration. 

link comment answered Sep 14 '13 at 20:41 SALEH New member

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