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Is this sentence correct? "John drives his car to go to an office to work." thanks.

asked Oct 20 '12 at 11:19 May New member

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It is grammatically correct, but is stylistically wordy and awkward. It ends with too many infinitive "to go" and prepositional "to" phrases strung together. Perhaps:

 

"John drives his car to his office" or "John drive his car to work."

 

I hope this helps.

link comment answered Oct 20 '12 at 14:20 Jeff Pribyl Grammarly Fellow

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