how can i fix this sentence?
Most of the time they are not doing what they are supposed to be doing, instead they take the easy path.
There are two problems with your sentence: Firstly, there is inconsistency between the tenses used in the two clauses; secondly, you have created a comma splice by joining two independent clauses with a comma without using a coordinating conjunction.
Most of the time they do not do what they are supposed to; instead, they take the easy path.
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