Dear Leni; I watched a TV program on Vietnam the other day. It was very interesting and enticing,

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Dear Leni; I watched a TV program on Vietnam the other day. It was very interesting and enticing, I couldn´t help but think of you, and your endeavor into that Country. Nonetheless, I wish you yet another undoubtedly very interesting adventure into the history of mankind. Looking forward to your experiences! Best regards, Lew

asked Oct 12 '12 at 11:43 Lew Vacek New member

What question would you like to ask, Lew?

Peter GuessOct 12 '12 at 13:44

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It always helps to ask an actual question. Otherwise, we are left guessing about what you wanted to know. In this case, it appears the answer is 42.

 

That said, you have capitalized a word that is not a proper noun. You have incorrectly added a comma between two parts of a compound predicate. You have a sentence fragment that can be converted into a proper imperative sentence by adding a verb.

 

I will let you guess which sentences I am talking about. (Sorry, but turnabout is fair play.)

 

Good luck.

 

(You can always repost with specific questions.)

link comment answered Oct 12 '12 at 14:36 Jeff Pribyl Grammarly Fellow
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"Enticing" is probably not a word you want to use.  Since you are talking about Vietnam and history, I assume you are talking about wartime.  Enticing means that it is desirable and attractive.

link comment answered Oct 12 '12 at 14:55 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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