Sentence structure

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I know this sentence structure is all wrong but I am struggling to find a suitable change? Help.

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Ocean and river cruises that literally girdle the globe has now become the most popular form of vacation for millions of people.
asked Oct 10 '12 at 17:37 James Breitmun New member

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