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American Horror Story is a television show about a family who moves into a haunted house and faces trouble that will shatter their lives forever; more specifically, it is their daughter who endures misery and soon finds another whom she can share her pain with.
asked Oct 04 '12 at 16:48 Melissa Dabydeen New member

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. . . a family who move . . . and face . . .

. . . forever. More specifically, . . .

. . . the daughter . . .

. . . with whom she can share her pain.

 

If you were to use . . . a family that moves into a haunted house and faces . . . you would run into problems with the pronoun they further on.

link comment edited Oct 04 '12 at 17:05 Peter Guess Expert

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