Can someone revise this sentence?

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I would like to improve these sentence to make it sound more professional.

 

"Those who have previous experience with an individual with a psychological disorder."

 

I feel that "with an individual with" could be improved.

Also, I rather not use the word "suffering from" because this is an essay on stigma.

Thank you in advance.

asked Oct 04 '12 at 03:32 eduardo New member

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Eduardo, you can magically transform this clause by simply changing the first with to of.

Those who have previous experience of an individual with a psychological disorder . . . etc.

 

Going a stage further, you might also consider pluralizing thus:

Those who have previous experience of individuals with a psychological disorder . . . etc.

 

It was the with-with factor causing the niggling feeling.

link comment answered Oct 04 '12 at 08:00 Peter Guess Expert

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