run on sentence

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how can i word this in a better way?

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Comments such as, not everyone cares like you do, quiet does not mean everything is ok, people work the hardest when they follow their dreams, always have a plan B, hire happy people and loyalty is not rewarded in academia are evidence of her strong belief in the impact that support or lack of support can make in a person's career.
asked Oct 02 '12 at 17:42 d valestro New member

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I think it's unreasonable to ask this forum to write your essays for you, don't you?

 

Start by writing out your points in a list (with some white space between) and then think about how you might link them together in a coherent way.

link answered Oct 02 '12 at 18:24 Peter Guess Expert

This was actually a test to see how the service worked. One sentence does not a paper make! Try reading books about being a leader. The information will help with your ability to respond in ateaching manner. Good luck!

d valestroOct 09 '12 at 20:20

My response was appropriate to your post. So, now that you have "tested" Answers and discovered that it wasn't as easy as you thought to abuse . . . fill in the rest yourself.

Peter GuessOct 09 '12 at 21:53

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