Too many "to's"?
Can someone please tell me of another way to write this scentence?
"a higher percentage of participants * would claim to be willing to * socialise with an individual exhibiting negative symptoms"
The part I placed between * is the one I'm not sure of.
Thank you in advance :)
I agree that more is an excellent replacement for a higher percentage of. To solve the "to-to" issue you could write one of the following:
More participants would be willing to socialise with an individual exhibiting negative symptoms.
More participants would indicate their willingness to socialise with an individual exhibiting negative symptoms. (Perhaps a little wordy.)
More participants would be comfortable socialising with an individual exhibiting negative symptoms.
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