why is the word "was" such an issue

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suggestions for change

See example:

Maternal consent was required for participation in the study.
asked Sep 29 '12 at 04:13 Susan Alberts New member

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To move it to active voice you would write, "To participate in the study, maternal consent [was/is] required."  Tense of the verb would depend on what you're using in your paragraph or paper.  Whether you participate in the study today or participated last month, consent is required (assumption).

link answered Sep 30 '12 at 02:08 Kim Jackson New member

You've "moved" the phrase, but the voice is still passive.

Peter GuessSep 30 '12 at 21:08

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Patty's sentence is a grammatically valid, active version. However, since it was (probably) the people undertaking the study who stipulated that maternal consent was required, not the study, the sense has been changed. You should be careful not to scarifice logic and clarity in the persuit of a "passive-free" text, as in this case you would probably lose marks as a direct result.

link comment answered Sep 30 '12 at 21:14 Peter Guess Expert
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Using the passive voice is necessary in this instance. Your sentence is fine.

link comment answered Sep 29 '12 at 06:52 Peter Guess Expert

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