how can i have this paper edited please

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i would like to have this paragraph correctly edited for me please

See example:

Last week marked the beginning of the Chicago teachers strike.
asked Sep 17 '12 at 18:48 Bobbie New member

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You have posted a sentence, not a paragraph, and definitely not a paper.

 

You usually "mark" -- or celebrate, or commemorate -- the anniversary of an event. The Chicago teachers strike began last week.

link comment answered Sep 17 '12 at 19:42 Jeff Pribyl Grammarly Fellow
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This is a forum for discussing grammar and style. It is not an editing service.  We are all volunteers here. None of us works for Grammarly.  We will be glad to help you out with any particular sentence that you might be struggling with.  But we can't edit a paper.  Grammarly does have various software available.  Perhaps one of those will fit your need. 

link comment answered Sep 18 '12 at 00:53 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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