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the rationale for choosingb this theory is that it definesthe purpose of nursing intervention in helping patients and their families meet their self-care deficit needs unyil they are capable of independently meeting those needs

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The rationale for choosing this theory is that it defines the purpose of nursing interventions in helping patients and their families meet their self-care deficit needs until they are capable of independently meeting these needs.
asked Sep 16 '12 at 19:32 michelle campbell-edwards New member

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This is wordy. Can you say this more directly and with less jargon? Below, I will strip away much of what you wrote in an attempt to find the "heart" of the sentence. When I do, I find that "theory" might not be the right word.

 

This "theory" helps patients and their families meet their self-care deficit needs until they are capable of independently meeting those needs.

 

I hope I have not changed your meaning too much.

link comment answered Sep 17 '12 at 14:37 Jeff Pribyl Grammarly Fellow

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