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girl was one of the 150 passengers who were aboard the fateful plane that crashed while landing at the mangalore airport he had a miraculous escape as he clung to a tree on which he had landed while jumping from the plane oh what a narrow escape thought he to himself
asked Sep 14 '12 at 03:40
mustafabakshi
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mustafabakshi
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A girl was one of the 150 passengers who was aboard the fateful plane that crashed while landing at the mangalore airport. She had a miraculous escape as he clung to a tree on which she landed while jumping from the plane. Oh! what a narrow escape! She thought to herself!
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answered Sep 14 '12 at 03:50
sanjay
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Your paragraph can still be pruned. Why don't give it a shot?
looks like a test question.
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