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If some students are seeking alternative methods of learning, want to develop their critical thinking skills, or are headed to careers in service then voluntarily taking a service learning course would be ideal. 

 

 

Can someone give me pointers on how to rewrite this. It does not seem smooth. 

asked Sep 09 '12 at 19:29 Lauren New member

A service learning course is ideal for students seeking alertnative methods of learning, developing critical thinking skills and/or service careers.

Jean SawtelleSep 10 '12 at 15:07

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