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The time of reckoning has come and we, the American Medical Safety, a NGO have stood up first to be counted.
asked Sep 08 '12 at 03:11
Xenia Castell
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Xenia Castell
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American Medical "Safety" doesn't seem to be the name of an organization. After that, "a" should be replaced with "an", and another comma should follow "NGO."
The time of reckoning has come and we, the American Medical Society (or something), an NGO, have stood up first to be counted.
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answered Sep 14 '12 at 03:28
mysticete
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