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It has been about eleven months since I first contacted your directors of medical records Via Unowa, and nursing Armida Faessler and you requesting a copy of my deceased husband's medical records.
asked Sep 06 '12 at 22:14 Rhonda New member

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Will it be ok if I write this way?

It has been about eleven months since I first contacted the Director of Medical Records Via Unowa as well as a nurse named Armida Faessler and yourself requesting a copy of my deceased husband's medical records.

link answered Sep 07 '12 at 00:36 Azhar New member

Corrction: since I first contacted to the Director of Medical Records

AzharSep 07 '12 at 00:38

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