Sentence structure of "My wish, is simply for a smile from the peers."

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Is this sentence structure correct?

Any other grammatical problem?

asked Apr 17 '11 at 10:17 CF LOK New member

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My wish is simply to receive a smile from my peers.

 

You don't need the comma.  The rest of the sentence is a little unclear, so I've worded it more precisely.

link answered Apr 18 '11 at 17:40 Kimberly Expert

Any suggestion to make it more clear? CF LOKApr 19 '11 at 05:08

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