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 Sun and Joy synergy of silver streak and energy flows forth cascading flowers flashing colours.

edited Sep 04 '12 at 05:06 sanjay Expert

I have not punctuated, sir. Please see whether it makes any sense or please help me restructure it.

sanjaySep 04 '12 at 05:04

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The same is with me.

What I tried is here:

 

The Sun and Joy, the  synergy of silver streak and energy, flows forth cascading flowers' flashing colours.

link answered Sep 04 '12 at 08:11 Rahul Gupta Expert

Thanks a lot.

sanjaySep 04 '12 at 15:46

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You completely lost me on that one, Sanjay.  The only thing I can say is, "Huh?"

link answered Sep 04 '12 at 05:14 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

Sorry, I didn't take in, ma'am

sanjaySep 04 '12 at 05:15

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