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'I initially attempted to enter the information myself but was unsuccessful. Because this is a crucial part of the program, since it calculates the Consultants' and Surveyors' commissions, I would prefer that the changes be carried out by you to ensure utmost accuracy.' 

asked Aug 28 '12 at 18:12 Jamila New member

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