punctuation, style and word choice
What is the best possible correction to this sentence?:
'I initially attempted to enter the information myself but was unsuccessful. Because this is a crucial part of the program, since it calculates the Consultants' and Surveyors' commissions, I would prefer that the changes be carried out by you to ensure utmost accuracy.'
asked Aug 28 '12 at 18:12
Jamila
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