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The room has everything, a bathroom even.

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I find the word choice odd. A bathroom is a special purpose room that is defined by its contents -- it has a sink, a toilet, a bathtub or a shower (usually). So what you have said is the room has a different room in it.

 

To fix this, you need to change the first room into a word that means something more than a single room. The house, the apartment, the flat .... Or you need to say specifically what the room has: The room has everything, even a toilet and a sink.

link answered Aug 27 '12 at 00:58 Jeff Pribyl Grammarly Fellow

Good piece of advice. Thanks

sanjayAug 27 '12 at 04:58

Good point! but what I meant is that the bedroom has a bathroom but I don't actually know how to phrase it

user22Aug 28 '12 at 21:33

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I was born on November 5, 1974, and my doctor was at the polls 

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The room includes everything, even an en suit.

link comment answered Sep 16 '13 at 17:36 m dutt New member

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