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I used to cry, imploring to go for a walk whenever I want just like my sister. is the sentence and the choice of words in the sentence okay?

User22, I am sorry I could not guess your second part of your sentence.

sanjayAug 26 '12 at 15:33

Please wait for Jeff sir or Tolley sir to throw some light on your sentence.

sanjayAug 26 '12 at 15:44

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sanjayAug 26 '12 at 15:47

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Like Tolley, I had difficulty figuring out where your sentence ends and your question begins. And, like Tolley, I think the best answer to what I think is your sentence is --> "I used to cry just like my sister when I wanted to go for a walk."

link answered Aug 27 '12 at 00:47 Jeff Pribyl Grammarly Fellow

Thanks.

sanjayAug 27 '12 at 04:41

Thanks.

sanjayAug 27 '12 at 04:43

Sometimes it becomes very difficult to restructure the sentence.

sanjayAug 27 '12 at 04:43

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Whenever I want just like my sister--> This sentence does not make any sense to me.

I used to cry, imploring to go for a walk . This sentence is okay.

link answered Aug 26 '12 at 15:28 sanjay Expert

by "whenever I want just like my sister" I meant to say at any time I want just like what my sister does, so how can I say it in a correct way ?

user22Aug 26 '12 at 15:34

I want just as my sister does.

sanjayAug 26 '12 at 15:42

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