Is the sentence okay that way?
I used to cry, imploring to go for a walk whenever I want just like my sister. is the sentence and the choice of words in the sentence okay?
Like Tolley, I had difficulty figuring out where your sentence ends and your question begins. And, like Tolley, I think the best answer to what I think is your sentence is --> "I used to cry just like my sister when I wanted to go for a walk."
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