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Can anyone help reword this sentence, possibly into 2 sentences?

Keep the original form in your patient files and refer back to the previous time point acquisition forms for reference in conducting the next time point in the patient’s imaging sequence.

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Keep the original form in your patient files and refer back to the previous time point acquisition forms when conducting the next time point in the patient's imaging sequence.
asked Aug 22 '12 at 18:47 Deb Kinan New member

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Please change "refer back" to refer. 

patient files to patient's files.

link comment answered Aug 23 '12 at 04:25 sanjay Expert
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Keep the original form in your patient's files and refer to the previous time point acquisition forms when conducting the next time point in the patient's imaging sequence.

 

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Keep the original form in your patients' files and refer to the previous time point acquisition forms when conducting the next time point in the patients' imaging sequence. 

link comment answered Aug 28 '12 at 18:19 Jamila New member

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