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Dear Peter;

 

I would be very glad to resume teaching indoor cycling sessions at your health club once I received the money that is owing.

 

Thanks and Regards

 

Rayan

Peter owes Me some money asked Aug 20 '12 at 05:19 RAYAN New member

Why do you the post the question again on the forum?

sanjayAug 20 '12 at 17:19

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