Passive Voice! Can someone help me rewrite it?
There is no doubt that the entire country was affected by the images being shown.
Sanjay actually asks a profound question. I will expand it into two questions.
Why do you want your sentences, at least those you have posted, to be active voice? Is it a requirement of your teacher's? While it is difficult to tell without being able to read the full context, the sentences you've posted seem apt and direct, even if passive voice. If these sentences are spread amidst many active voice sentences, I would suggest leaving them alone. Often, the passive voice can be a welcome change of pace when used sparingly.
If most of your sentences are passive, Sanjay's question becomes appropriate. Why do you tend to write in the passive voice? Understanding your own inner voice can help you adopt a more active voice.
When I began my research manuscript two years ago, I discovered that I was overusing the passive voice. I did not feel I was qualified to write boldly about my topic. I felt the need to waffle a bit, and the passive voice allowed me to do that. I thought, I will leave the unequivocal statements to the experts. However, I came to realize that I AM the expert on my topic -- I have the degrees and I done the original research. If I can't draw conclusions and make bold statements, who can? With that insight, I found that I no longer felt the need to write in the passive voice.
To your sentence posted here, starting a sentence with "there is" is not only passive, but is considered especially weak. While I don't object to passive sentences in general, I would find a way to rewrite this sentence. Who has no doubt? What caused the country to be affected?
|link||answered Aug 03 '12 at 05:26 Jeff Pribyl Grammarly Fellow|
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There is a point system here. When a question or answer is given an up vote, the user receives points. I believe there are only three "levels" assigned to these points. New member, Contributor, and Expert. Personally, I think it is a mistake to tie a point system to calling someone an expert. I don't consider myself an expert, though I am highly proficient. Unfortunately, even someone who asks good questions can achieve “expert” status on here. This is meant as no offense to Sanjay, who has greatly improved his understanding and skill. But the fact that it now says expert under his name is bound to be confusing to new participants. The same could happen with someone who continues asking good questions (getting votes for them) but doesn't improve at all.
The question of passive and active voice is the most common question on this forum. Since you have asked a few questions about it, it might be helpful for you to look at all the varied answers given to these questions. In the search field near the top of the page, type in passive or active or both and it will list questions that relate to the topic.
It is important to know that passive voice is not grammatically incorrect. Most teachers want you to write in active voice, so the software points it out. Sometimes, passive voice is the best way to write a sentence. In general, though, active voice is more appealing to the reader.
|link||answered Aug 03 '12 at 05:33 Patty T Grammarly Fellow|
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