Where is the introductory phrase?

If the media had chosen to maintain a code of ethics during the coverage of Hurricane Katrina so much more could have been done for the gulf coast.

asked Aug 03 '12 at 03:48

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You have a very long introductory clause. A comma should follow "Katrina".

If the media had chosen to maintain a code of ethics during the coverage of Hurricane Katrina, ....

link	answered Aug 03 '12 at 04:23 Jeff Pribyl Grammarly Fellow

I am going to up-vote you, sir. By the way, I have answered the question of new member on the other thread. Please go through it and set it up if you find anything wrong.
http://answers.grammarly.com/questions/6893-for-an-entrance-exam-essay/ Thanks in advance.

– sanjay – Aug 03 '12 at 04:35

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