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Turning to them all, Fritti said, "I think Maria should enter the desert-lands alone, however, we must find out whether the Black Cat is sitting outside or inside her den, as it would be far easier for Maria, if the cat was outside.
asked Jul 22 '12 at 00:29 Grace New member

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You started the quotation mark but didnot end it.

The last section of your sentence is in Type 2 condition. In that case, it should be "were" in stead of 'was'.

 

Turning to them all, Fritti said, "I think Maria should enter the desert-lands alone, however, we must find out whether the Black Cat is sitting outside or inside her den as it would be far easier for Maria if the cat were outside."

link comment answered Jul 22 '12 at 02:53 Rahul Gupta Expert
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Why do you want to hypenate the word "desert lands"?

 

Turning to them all, Fritti said, "I think Maria should enter the desert lands alone, however, we must find out whether the black cat is sitting outside or inside her den as it would be far easier for Maria if the cat were outside."

link comment edited Jul 22 '12 at 05:42 sanjay Expert

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