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What's important to note is that outsourcing provides a heighten purpose to management to provide exemplary services while freeing resources so that companies can focus on their core functions.
asked Jul 19 '12 at 00:34 Rudene Glass New member

It should be heightened purpose.

sanjayJul 19 '12 at 04:26

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Outsourcing allows for organizations to focus on their core competencies.

link comment answered Jul 19 '12 at 05:11 sanjay Expert

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