wordiness
What is the correct framing for this statement?
See example:
What's important to note is that outsourcing provides a heighten purpose to management to provide exemplary services while freeing resources so that companies can focus on their core functions.
asked Jul 19 '12 at 00:34
Rudene Glass
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Rudene Glass
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Outsourcing allows for organizations to focus on their core competencies.
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answered Jul 19 '12 at 05:11
sanjay
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It should be heightened purpose.
– sanjay – Jul 19 '12 at 04:26 add comment