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First let me congratulate you on your knighthood (the title 'SIR' ) bestowed upon you by your esteemed and enlightened Kala clan of Badolgaon. We feel honoured that a friend of ours of long standing has been bestowed knighthood by his Kala clan (hope this title has also been accepted by the Kala's of Sumeri Gaon). So from now onwards permit us to address you as Sir in all our communications.
Congratulations on bestowing the Knighthood tiltle upon you by your esteemed and enlightened Kala clan of Badolgaon. What a remarkable accomplishment! No one deserves this award more than you. This award recognizes that much of your success is directly attributable to your efforts. We always look up to you and feel proud to be one of your friends. Please permit us to address you as "Sir" in all our future correspondence.
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