Paralelism
Can somebody help me to find paralilism errors?
See example:
Through the use of e-portfolios, students could include sharing their creative work and documented life experiences with others who provide feedback and assessment of their learning and skills development.
asked Jul 01 '12 at 20:53
Jose
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Jose
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Through the use of e-portfolios, students could include sharing their creative work and documenting life experiences with others who provide feedback and assessment of their learning and skills development.
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answered Jul 02 '12 at 05:22
sanjay
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You have the right idea, Sanjay. But include + sharing doesn't cut it. In this case, documented is a verb used as an adjective and no parallelism problem actually exists. The sentence is, however, wordy. See the other copy of this same question.
Thank you very much.
But include + sharing doesn't cut it.---What do you mean by this sentence, Sir?
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