Paralelism

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Can somebody help me to find paralilism errors?

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Through the use of e-portfolios, students could include sharing their creative work and documented life experiences with others who provide feedback and assessment of their learning and skills development.
asked Jul 01 '12 at 20:53 Jose New member

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Through the use of e-portfolios, students could include sharing their creative work and documenting life experiences with others who provide feedback and assessment of their learning and skills development.

link answered Jul 02 '12 at 05:22 sanjay Expert

You have the right idea, Sanjay. But include + sharing doesn't cut it. In this case, documented is a verb used as an adjective and no parallelism problem actually exists. The sentence is, however, wordy. See the other copy of this same question.

Jeff PribylJul 02 '12 at 13:15

Thank you very much.

sanjayJul 02 '12 at 13:47

But include + sharing doesn't cut it.---What do you mean by this sentence, Sir?

sanjayJul 02 '12 at 13:54

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