the sentence is......After he had parked the bus, he gathered his things and went into the front office to clock out.
another sentence is......Dorothy prepared dinner for the kids, set the table, and then went into their bedroom to see about John...
The first sentence squinting modifier is "into the front office"
second sentence squinting modifier is "into their bedroom"
I seem to receive about 6-7 of these every 20 pages in my novel and not sure how to solve this ongoing problem.
Some feedback or sample change of sentence would be appreciated..
Thanks in advance
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