My transition journal
How can I correct this. thank you
See example:
Ms. Malone lobbied to get agenda for change written into the new policy making contract to make positive changes for the quality of care to patients.
asked Jun 18 '12 at 02:18
SIMONE JEROME-HANNON
New member
SIMONE JEROME-HANNON
New member
1 answer 
To make positive changes in the quality of patient care, Ms. Malone lobbied to get the agenda for change written into the new policy=making contract.
I hope this did not change your meaning.
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answered Jun 18 '12 at 02:48
Jeff Pribyl
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