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This is my conclusion sentence- Can someone give me some tips?

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There are not any goals I would change, including my July goal of weight training, because I know that at any time I can add a strategy to help me achieve better success and establish stronger rewards if necessary.
asked Jun 16 '12 at 19:03 Lauren New member

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I would do:

 

There are not any goals I would change, including my July goal of weight training. I know that at any time, I can add a strategy to help me achieve better success and establish stronger rewards if necessary.

 

I would say that, because punctuation is largely a reflection of pauses and pitch changes in speech, to say the sentence out loud, and put the commas in where you pause. If the insertion or deletion of a comma changes the meaning of a sentence, and that's not what you mean, don't change it. If it changes the flow, think about how you want the sentence to flow. I hope that helps.

link comment answered Jun 18 '12 at 21:19 Anna New member

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