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I am pretending to be a journalist who had investigated the murder of King Duncan in Shakespeare's play, Macbeth. I am having trouble phrasing this sentence properly. Please help.

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The wouden body of the late King Duncan was found in the castle of Macbeth by the King's son, Macduff.
asked May 30 '12 at 03:15 Cianna New member

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    The wooden(?) body of the late King Duncan was found in Macbeth’s castle by the King's son, Macduff.

 

Wooden - a bit strange to my ears, I would use rigid (or something else).

Found - discovered would be better in my opinion

 

Another possibility:

 

King Duncan's bloodied body was discovered in Macbeth's castle by his son Macduff.

link answered May 30 '12 at 13:39 Ipsy New member

The first idea is best. I would use "discovered" as well.

TolleyMay 30 '12 at 14:08

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