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Anil used to business of sandal wood. One day, he came to know that selling of woods have been decline.After thinking for a long time, he got an idea "If Raja, his enemy, passed away then his family member would buy woods from my shop.Owing to that, I got profit enough.

asked May 25 '12 at 16:24 GAURAV SHARMA New member

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Anil used to do  sandalwood business. One day, he came to know that selling of woods has declined.  After thinking for a long time, he got an idea,  "If Raja, his enemy, passed away then his family member would buy wood from his (Anil)  shop. Owing to that, I got profit enough.

link comment edited May 26 '12 at 04:05 sanjay Expert
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In the first sentence, as Sanjay suggests, "do" is rquired after "to".

Anil used to do Sandal wood business. 

 

The second sentence has got a singular subject i.e. "selling", so it should be "has" not "have".

One day, he came to know that the selling of woods has declined.

 

The last one, I read it thrice and finally concluded that "my" is not proper here, as the article is third person account, but this is quite confusing.

After thinking for a long time, he got an idea, if Raja, his enmy, passed away, his family members would buy wood from his (Anil's) shop.

 

In my opinion it can be reversed, if it doesn't change the desired meaning.

After thinking for a long time, he got an idea that he would have better business if Raja, his enemy, passed away.

link answered May 25 '12 at 16:55 Rahul Gupta Expert

Thank you very much. I didn't notice that.

sanjayMay 26 '12 at 04:00

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link comment answered Aug 15 '12 at 13:32 almaz New member
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""Anil used to have the business of wood sandals. one day he knew that bussiness of selling sandals have been declined. after thinking for a long time he faced with an idea.If my opponent, Raja, passes away his family member would buy woods from my shop and i will benefit enough.""

I hope this helps you.

link answered May 25 '12 at 17:56 hadi New member

Please check for the spellings.

sanjayMay 26 '12 at 04:02

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