find the error in the sentence
the rich should not exploit poor economically in the name of capitalism.
asked May 20 '12 at 15:52
sangeet growar
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sangeet growar
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The rich should not exploit the poor economically in the name of Capitalism.
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edited Jul 31 '12 at 18:06
sanjay
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Capitalize the first letter of the first word as Sanjay shows. "Poor" requires a definate article "the poor". "Capitalism" is not a proper noun and should not be capitalized. "Economically" can be left as is or deleted (my preference).
"The rich should not exploit the poor in the name of capitalism."
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answered May 20 '12 at 18:07
Jeff Pribyl
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When we refer to the terms "rich" and "poor", it is clear we are discussing the economic matter, so it would be better to delete "economically", but if we want to add any other option like socially,etc., it can go with it.
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answered May 21 '12 at 03:35
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We seem to have a lot of relatives common between us.
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answered May 22 '12 at 15:40
sangeet growar
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