Nouns strings

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I have a problem with nouns strings in the following example: “If the whole family is involved in weight management efforts success rates are improved, this prevents children from being ostracized.”

asked Apr 04 '11 at 18:59 girmay asfawesen New member

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If the whole family is involved in weight management efforts, success rates are improved. This prevents children from being ostracized.”

link comment answered Apr 06 '11 at 21:10 Kimberly Expert

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