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Talent management, is evolving from a simple hiring process to now become a more strategic business function that involves all levels of management ;talent management is now more a desirable HR Program: it is a leadership imperative.

asked May 01 '12 at 20:31 ANN MARIE LOCKE New member

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Talent management, a simple hiring process, is evolving into a strategic business function that includes all levels of management. A more desirable HR program is a leadership imperative!

link comment answered May 01 '12 at 21:04 Kevin Knott New member
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Correction on previous answer:

Talent management, a simple hiring process, is evolving into a strategic business function that includes all levels of management.  Facilitating change in the HR program  is a leadership imperative!

(Changed wording due to comparison word, MORE. More desirable than what?  I'm not sure what you are trying to say.) 

link comment answered May 01 '12 at 21:20 Kevin Knott New member
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Talent management, is evolving from a simple hiring process to  become a more strategic business function that involves all levels of management; talent management is now more a desirable HR Program: it is a leadership imperative.

link comment answered May 02 '12 at 11:35 sanjay Expert

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