Rewording, Punctuation

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Is the punctuation Proper?

 

How can it be reworded better?

 

"Teaching is a job of satisfaction, an opportunity to express ourselves whatever we gained from our experience in our life and a profession which allows us to explore with an open mind and heart. I want to be a part of such a holy work."

punctuation asked Apr 27 '12 at 08:53 Rahul Gupta Expert

You're right about 'have' and 'we'. I transposed these words inadvertently. My editor had the day off. 'Learnt' is archaic, but might be more common in British English.

Lewis NeidhardtApr 28 '12 at 09:10

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