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Also, one of important concern is their AD23 drug effect that affected badly for consumers' health who had purchased and used products were experienced heart attack

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Also, one of important concern is their AD23 drug effect that affected badly for consumers' health who had purchased and used products were experienced heart attack.
asked Jun 02 '14 at 15:47 bagatumur New member

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Patty TJun 03 '14 at 02:03

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Perhaps you could try this sentence as an alternative:

 

Important health concerns were raised when a high percentage of AD23 consumers suffered from heart attacks.

 

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link comment answered Jun 05 '14 at 20:30 Karen OKeefe Contributor

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