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Also, one of important concern is their AD23 drug effect that affected badly for consumers' health who had purchased and used products were experienced heart attack

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Also, one of important concern is their AD23 drug effect that affected badly for consumers' health who had purchased and used products were experienced heart attack.
asked Jun 02 at 15:47 bagatumur New member

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Patty TJun 03 at 02:03

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Perhaps you could try this sentence as an alternative:

 

Important health concerns were raised when a high percentage of AD23 consumers suffered from heart attacks.

 

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link comment answered Jun 05 at 20:30 Karen OKeefe Contributor

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