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What is wrong with this sentence ? HELP. I know it is the adjective, but I cannot figure out why ...  "The whole structure of the school system does not treat boys very friendly." 

asked May 23 at 09:50 Liv New member

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Here are two possible alternatives:

 

The entire school system should be restructured to make an environment more friendly for the boys.

The entire school system could be restructured to create a friendlier environment for the boys.

 

I like the second sentence better. You can substitute 'could' with 'should', depending upon the rest of your paragraph.

 

Best of luck!

 

'ding'

link comment answered May 26 at 20:41 Karen OKeefe Contributor

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