What is wrong with this sentence ? HELP. I know it is the adjective, but I cannot figure out why ...  "The whole structure of the school system does not treat boys very friendly." 

asked May 23 '14 at 09:50 Liv New member

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Here are two possible alternatives:


The entire school system should be restructured to make an environment more friendly for the boys.

The entire school system could be restructured to create a friendlier environment for the boys.


I like the second sentence better. You can substitute 'could' with 'should', depending upon the rest of your paragraph.


Best of luck!



link comment answered May 26 '14 at 20:41 Karen OKeefe Contributor

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