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Some had survived and gained some privileges, others unfortunately have not come back alive. Why do we need a semicolon after "privileges" instead of a comma?

asked Apr 22 '12 at 05:16 sanjay Expert

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Because those are both Independent Clauses. Complete senteces in their own right. Using only a comma to divide them creates a "comma splice". I try to avoid semi-colons in my writing (as a matter of style, not because they are incorrect). I would use a period and make two sentences. Actually, I would rephrase it a make it more concise. You repeated the word 'some' in the first sentence, which makes it uncomfortable (in my opinion).

 

Some survived and gained privilege, others did not.

link edited Apr 22 '12 at 06:00 Tony Proano Expert

Thanks a lot!

sanjayApr 22 '12 at 12:24

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