Please check. Is "then" and "too" OK?

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They took their eyes off of God and began focusing on what they didn’t have.   I look at the children of Israel and wonder how they could lose sight of God after witnessing such miracles.  Then I’m reminded that I too tend to focus on what I don’t have. 

asked May 10 at 22:07 Susan New member

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Yes, I think then and too are fine.  I would change could lose to could have lost.

link answered May 10 at 23:11 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

Thanks. Good answer!

Susan May 11 at 01:22

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