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Living in a world that demands my time and attention, I thank God for His grace when my focus is unsteady and my priorities are not in order.

asked May 10 at 17:33 Susan New member

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Yes, "when" is the right word. The sentence is fine.

link answered May 10 at 18:11 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

Do you think the word "demands" is too strong? Do you think I should use "requires?"Living in a world that requires my time and attention...

Susan May 11 at 02:12

I agree that demands is stronger than requires, but only you know which one fits your meaning best. There are times when I feel like the world is very demanding, and other times when I think, well, these are things I am required to do. If neither word feels quite right to you, head to the thesaurus.

Patty TMay 11 at 04:46

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