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Unpaid internship have been around for years, any person who wants to work in the white-collar career field, has been tasked to deal with internships that are not paid.

asked May 05 at 14:00 Daisy Mendoza New member

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The first comma should be a period.  The rest is a second independent clause.  It does not need a comma either.  But it is very awkward.  How about this:

 

Internships for white collar jobs have traditionally been unpaid.

link comment answered May 05 at 15:20 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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